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I dream of Madrid
Because I know nearly nothing about it

Except that the heat is tangible
And sits in a layer beneath the skin
And the sweat of the heat is silk
I imagine it tastes of honey and wine

Except that the churches are tall
And God still has a fist of gold
Just as he has a palm of silver
Shaded in the vaulted arches of another age
The cheekbones of giants holding up the world
There the air smells of musk and incense
That has long since been swept away
By the wings of the doves that dance where the choirs sang.

Except that the nights are long
And the golden lights filter across the water
Like a sunset sleeps on the silted floor
And  the music is a tango is a rhumba is a flamenco
The soundtrack of love and of lust
And the pulse of the city is up
To catch souls in a rhythm that can't be matched

Except that the language is beautiful
As coarse as the women at the well once were and always are
As liquid as the honey-drip in the amber fire water
As rapid as kites caught in a storm
As languid as a wooing, for my heart is lost to it
And the tongues weave through the day
As ignorant of their power as they are careless of their words
It's a low-heel stomping on a black wood floor
Palms attacking the time above the head
And the mandolin that ends the war of sound
That is the language.

Except that it is free
And that my dreams have belonged to many places
And they have been shared in whispers
Caught and held in the spaces between held hands
And this city that I know nothing of is all of me and all of mine
Though the sea and understanding part us.

Except that the sea is merely miles and distance can be crossed
And time is only an education in want.
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~winterkate Jan 26, 2013  Student Writer
And time is only an education in want. Amazing.
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*BlakeCurran Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
AAAAAMAZING. I'm waiting to travel, also :D
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`vespera Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful :heart:
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=CrematedMan Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
The last sentence is pure brilliance. Magnificent.
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~shadowzabimaru Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Very well written- it took me back to Madrid and my home country, Spain.
The only thing is there aren't many tangos there haha.
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~GlamPhan Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhh... wow....
This is wonderful.
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*Asfodelo Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful words, very mudane yet so dreamy :heart:
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~54Claymore Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was really good! Definitely going to have to check out more of your work. Amazing how a place and bring such words and feelings into our thoughts
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~Lantis-Erin Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. :)
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~gummyrabbit Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
This is like the kind of poem I try to write, only better. I'm jealous. It's gorgeous.
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